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CITIES OF NIGHT
The prickle-skin of neon
Electric cicada buzz.
Light – the city’s camoflage.
Fickle, flicker
Paling sun, moon, stars.
Echoed shadows coloured.
Time puddled,
Hissing.
Neon kimono
Expressionless stare
Indwelling darkness.
Iron castle
Skull-wreathed.
A sludge of thought
Clay-like, heavy.
The weight of
Tomorrow.
simonhlilly 
Swinging for the fences.
And you’ve cleared five of them. Awesome writing.
Ah, but we all fall at the last….
Thanks, though not quite the fizzy swelter of your cityscspes!