YSTRAD FFLUR (Variations)
1
Flower valley, quietness complete.
To count the short years of the living,
To count the longer years of the dead.
2
Stones warmed by long late summer sun,
Dew still wet past midday, tears for the lost,
Prayers for them.
3
One arch, one door opening onto blue sky.
A strong door it must be
To have lasted the closing
of so many centuries.
4
Billowed on Deheubarth
Dreamed green weight.
An illuminated landscape
A foliate scroll, inhabited-
The whispers of history.
5
One stone archway,
aisles dew carpeted,
nave ribbed in cloud.
The constant choir is this little stream,
and sheep distant on grazed hills.
One yew of many remains
where the poet robin nests.
Pine and dark beech the only roofs now,
the wheeling kite the only call to vespers.
6
A vessel worn smooth with prayer heals yet and shall forever,
Blessed by its past and the dreaming dead.
A valley wide with flowers, a road ended in tranquillity.
7
Flower valley.
Nothing but peace.
Emptied of longing.
Rested under heaven.
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Ystrad Fflur ( pronounced ust rad fleer) is the Welsh name of Strata Florida Abbey in Mid Wales, north-east of Tregaron. It means ‘valley plain of the river Fflur’, but in Latin has become ‘Flower Valley’. Little remains here except an archway and foundations, but the site and location are memorable in their tranquillity and history. Strata Florida held the official records of the Welsh Kingdoms and actd as the religious heart of the country. A well-known poet Dafydd ap Gwilym (14th century) is said to be buried under the yew in the churchyard. Deheubarth was the name of the Kingdom here. The Nanteos Cup, believed by some to be a contender for the true Holy Grail, was kept at Strata Florida before the dissolution of the monasteries. It was famed for its miraculous healing powers. We visited on a misty, sunny day in late summer. It has a similar atmosphere and sanctified silence to Iona in Scotland, the same intangible presence of history and vigilance.
Noted your comparison of this site to Iona in Scotland. Any further thoughts on this similarity?
Hello.
Both are the burial ground of kings of dynasties now long gone. Both selected for isolation and beauty. Both places of scholarship. Iona is by far the oldest and has links back to very early Celtic Church, whilst Strata Florida was established by a French monastic Order. Both have romantic links to nationalism…..
Simon, I think this is beautiful not only in the larger sense but in those ways you have of coming up with remarkable phrasings and images. I do have some things I might tell you about what I think would make this a really outstanding poem, but this is not the forum for that. Besides I don’t feel always comfortable criticizing someone else’s work. But great work. Kudos. Smiles….>KB
Please feel free to say ( I know I am reticent doing such as well) but it can be useful and amusing to all. I’m afraid I tend not to want to ‘finish’ too much. These small pieces I see as sketches, and I often publish them here so I don’t lose track of them completely….
Like ‘7″‘especially.