SCARECROW
this
my transparent, liquid window
give us our dreams
our daily dead
sound without meaning
words without end.
sweep this.
collecting debris
for the sake
of some little gravity.
this shaped pattern:
small notion wrapped in upon
ghosted misted identity
forgetting sunsets
to inhabit the dawn,
a superstitious equation
bequeathed a pulse.
lay it down,
lay it all down,
open and dancing
up to the mountains.
this thread now,
this chariot –
broken star fragment
drowned in salt.
lay the fire to the green fields
flesh in new colour,
frost-patterned, cool.
still the eye, the tongue, the demon.
still the angel,
still the urgent bright ones.
still the whispers,
still the memory.
this house perched high,
this sunlit porch
this upturned story
this dewy claxon.
give us our dreams
our daily dead
sound without meaning
words without end.
amen.
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Review
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REVIEW
Ice moon
Punches light
Through brittle
Smoked sky.
Nothing is revealed
By word or movement.
Body’s aching
All the time
(As the song says)
As the song.
City words.
Skinny,
Low-fat language.
No need for pause
Or repeat.
Socio-
Political,
A smatter of
Classical reference,
Footnotes,
Hand gesture,
Erudite,
Excusing
All manners of
Genocide.
Overplayed is
The well-suited
Dictionary.
The poet
Understudied.
The poet
Misunderstood.
Trope, trapped
And clichéd.
Time to sink
To anonymity,
Forgetting,
Forsaking this clamour
For another, yet another
Point of view,
Validation.
Worms wriggling
Upwards to
Drown in puddles.
Picked off by
Black birds
With golden
Beaks.
A
Metaphor
Too far
Perhaps.
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